"It is rumored he was once human, his background shrouded in darkness even to himself. Now he is nothing more then a faceless void who seeks revenge on the men who have stolen his identity. Time passes so slowly for him that he can evade enemy attacks with ease and find the weakest point to strike back. Sometimes time passes so slowly it would seem to have stopped entirely."
I dont really see anything to critique in this XD You did a great job. The only thing I would say to challenge you is work on adding more detail to your coloring, but that's just me being picky. XD I love this. You did great.
And yeah, Faceless Void is one of my favourite heroes to play. Trax, Faceless, Nightstalker, Lifestealer... They're all good, hehe.
Congrats on almost making it though!